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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Andrea, this feels carefully held.

What stays with me is how you let survival arrive without spectacle. The restraint matters β€” the way you protect innocence while still naming what was taken. The emergence is quiet, bodily, and earned.

β€œForged in fire” could have tipped into clichΓ©, but here it doesn’t β€” because the poem stays with breath and presence rather than triumph, and you've done that so well.

Thank you for trusting this piece to be both gentle and strong at the same time.

Maria Matheou's avatar

You show exceptional restraint. A powerful poem.

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