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Miles Hack's avatar

Oh wow! Brevity of consequence! Very chilling πŸ₯ΆπŸ‘

Josh Datko's avatar

Oh, a horror poem! Nice.

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

What a cool piece! So beautiful! 😍

VedJournal βœοΈπŸ“œ's avatar

Hey Andrea

That's really heart breaking Poem.

I can feel the girl heart beats😭

Thanks for sharing and keep writing πŸ’«

Alicia's avatar

Painted a vivid picture here!

Cory's avatar

Ohh, love this! ❀️

Words about things and stuff's avatar

Oh that was a horror poem. You said just enough and not too much. Perfect!