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Andrea Mars's avatar

So much weight to this one, Andrea - really sunk me a little deeper into my own grief I’m going through for my father-in-law who passed away suddenly last February. He was like a second father to me and a great friend also. And to me being also a foreigner in this country (my husband’s native Portugal), that meant a lot to be so accepted and loved by him and my mother-in-law like their daughter. The thing I regret most is my daughter only knowing him for the first year of her life. He was her biggest fan.

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

It's so tough losing someone that cares about you so deeply. I'm sorry your daughter didn't get to spend more time with him. Big hugs to you and your family <3

Cory's avatar

So much soul compacted in a single piece. Lovely. ❀️

Cory's avatar

❀️

VedJournal βœοΈπŸ“œ's avatar

Just Amazing

Intense Poem

Hold deep meaning

Thanks for sharing and keep writing πŸ’«

Chris Hughes's avatar

Yes, grief is tough... been through it... we just keep going.

Hope you’re having a beautiful weekend! πŸ’œ

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you for reading <3 One footstep and then another…

Bhavika's avatar

Beautifully written!

Amit The Storyteller's avatar

This is beautiful thanks for sharing Andrea !!

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Letters By Lantern's avatar

More than trees know their fallenβ€”

what you have written here

is as if God Himself was callin’.

Grief comes in

like a winter wind,

in the tide of gratitude

given for where you have bin’.

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you for your kind comment. ❀️❀️ and for reading! πŸ“–

Mβ€” Dash's avatar

This was Lucy’s favorite part- β€œI do know that the rhythm of one foot and then another.

Matches the drumming of my heartache.

As I say again, and again and again.

Goodbye ...”

The cadence matches the experienceβ€” it feels embodied.βœ¨πŸ’™

Lovely

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

<3 thank you so much for reading.

Nixie πŸ§šπŸΌβ€β™€οΈ's avatar

lovely poem! subscribed!

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you Nixie! So happy to have you along for the ride!

Maya's avatar

Beautifully written!

Lucia's avatar

gorgeous & haunting

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you so much for your feedback Lucia!

lex πŸ’Œ's avatar

the weight of this poem is stunningly painful and profound β€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή moving through grief is an experience that is so difficult to put into words but you’ve done it so deeply and beautifully. my heart is with you!! thank you for sharing your heart with us

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you Lex! it's been a very challenging couple of years but I've done my best to navigate my grief with grace. I'm so glad this piece resonated with you. Thank you as always for your insightful comments!

Jordana’s MarginsπŸŒΈπŸ’“πŸ–‹οΈ's avatar

Last time hit like a ton of bricksπŸ₯ΊπŸ«ΆπŸ½

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you so much for reading, I'm sorry that this resonated so much with you but I hope it helps to know that you are not alone. Grief comes for all of us <3 .

Josh Datko's avatar

Very nice. I wish we had more solstice snow at the moment!

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Same! I was lucky to get a good picture of the snowy mountain tops last week but they aren’t as snowy now :(

Livvyinthelife's avatar

Oh,…. This is lovely. My Persian

just passed 4 days ago, she was a rescue I had gotten her when she was 3. She was 7 the last time I held her warm body. <3

Keep on writing, you’re making emotional waves!!!!

Andrea (Andy) Curran πŸŒ„'s avatar

Thank you so much for your comment. I'm so sorry to hear you lost you Persian. It's so hard to lose a pet, I love mine like children so I know there is so much grief in their loss. Sending warm hugs for you.

Aaliya's avatar

Hauntingly beautiful 😒