Thank you, I think :D . Definitely a lot of hard work over the years! I read this one live too and added commentary about why I wrote it! I'll add that here eventually so keep an eye out for that!
I really enjoyed listening to this poem while walking the dog this morning. It makes me reflect on where Iβm trying to go on my plans, contrasted with moving through the fear of the unknown future.
It was a nice compliment to the lovely scenery on my walk and the gorgeous morning weather. π₯°
I was about to comment on this when I first read it, but I was cooking and then my daughter wanted something and now itβs like two hours later and I forgot what I was going to say. Whatever it was Iβm sure it was very profound. Dang it.
Every Line, an eternal truth, statement of facts we forget to remember within ourselvesβ awesome sauce!
Thank you so much β€οΈ
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Hey Andrea
Thanks for Sharing "Flames of renewal" π₯
This Poem is really a fire.
Keep writing π«
Just highlighting this part
Reaching out with open hands
life lived outside of
We find our way
Thank you so much for your present and thoughtful reading!
I love this - and I LOVE fire π₯
Excellent writing, Andy!
Thank you so much Penelope! β€οΈ
Andrea I am so jealous of your talent
Thank you, I think :D . Definitely a lot of hard work over the years! I read this one live too and added commentary about why I wrote it! I'll add that here eventually so keep an eye out for that!
Thatβs awesome!!!!
"A life lived outside of plan"... I loved that, Andy. Beautiful poem!π₯
Thank you!
I really enjoyed listening to this poem while walking the dog this morning. It makes me reflect on where Iβm trying to go on my plans, contrasted with moving through the fear of the unknown future.
It was a nice compliment to the lovely scenery on my walk and the gorgeous morning weather. π₯°
Thank you so much for reading and for coming to listen during my live!
I like how it seems to grow as you move through it, adding a layer of hope towards the end. Lovely.
Thank you! β€οΈ
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Thanks! β€οΈ Not sure if this one resonated as much with people but it was fun to write. :D
I suppose they can't all be big hits. Just let it be what it is and keep moving forward.
Then again, maybe they haven't had a chance to read it yet.
Indeed :D <3
I love the shift from βUnsure if I can find my wayβ to βWe find our way.β That subtle change transforms uncertainty into hope.
Beautifully done.
Thank you β€οΈ
I was about to comment on this when I first read it, but I was cooking and then my daughter wanted something and now itβs like two hours later and I forgot what I was going to say. Whatever it was Iβm sure it was very profound. Dang it.